Thursday, June 14, 2007

Poetry thursday 6.14.07

We

With love each moment
Ceases to be separate
Seconds, days, years fuse into
One eternal now.
With love each person
Ceases to be separate
Bodies, minds, hearts fuse into
One eternal we.

8 comments:

Tracie Lyn Huskamp said...

I love the rhythm... The verse carries me away!

Crafty Green Poet said...

Very true...

gautami tripathy said...

"Seconds, days, years fuse into
One eternal now."

How true..

aubrey said...

i love it. it is very true.

Rob Kistner said...

Isn't love magic!

In good times its sublime, in troubled times, it's the light to guide you home -- even in times of disagreement, it is the path to understanding... ;)

Loved what you wrote CG!

welcome to my universe said...

Really beautiful, i love your style!

Clockworkchris said...

Wow-I was just about to comment and then I saw it-A link to my page! You are awesome!!! Back to the poem. I like how the first word is seperated to give it emphasis. I do think living together, being around one another, marriage, and many other things tend to form a union of people that can finish each others sentences like twins. This is a great idea and the poem speaks volumes of that idea.

Hedwyg said...

Oh - that is PERFECT. Short, snappy... just right!

Thank you!
Hedwyg