Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Incandescence

Grown cold, embers pale
ashen husks separate
then scatter with

a breath, a touch

gently fans one
faltering flame to fervent
all-consuming fever.

7 comments:

tumblewords said...

I like the movement and visuals presented in this piece! Vivid layering.

LittleWing said...

this is so very good... and the photo adds so much!!!

No Cool Story said...

I read this yesterday and forgot to comment. DUH!

I heart it.

No Cool Story said...

Ooops. I mean today.

(it does seem like yesterday)

paisley said...

girl that was awesome.. just perfect.....

Crafty Green Poet said...

very vivid

anthonynorth said...

Nicely put.