Destiny is fickle: she's a tease and she’s a liar
promise you the world but dull complacency inspire
and worse, destroy your will to choose both liberty and life
trust me, harlot Destiny’s a mistress, not a wife.
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19 comments:
A lovely piece beautifully read.
cool cool cool... the voice the words the picture... lovely...
This is great! Love the treatment, love message... very cool! ;)
Interesting thoughts.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
So true. It certainly can be.
I like your both your voices - your reading voice and your writing voice! Lovely post!
Totally loved the tone of voice you adopted to read your poem.
Great poem!
Smiles and Light
P.S. Hope you don't get a double of this, but my first reponse disappeared!
them some wise words, and well spoken... how creative..
Succinct. Well read. Completely with you. Bravo!
nice touch, reading it.
very nice, i like that you read it.
Very nicely done.
Very well done.
get going
"Destiny is a mistress not a wife"
ah interesting..
i liked this very much....
Keith, Paisley, Rob, Jeques, Anthony--thanks for the kind words.
Jen--Yeah, I think the concept of destiny can become a crutch (or an excuse for acting entitled). Tried to say that as succinctly as possible.
Tumblewords--thanks! It's nice to see you again.
Greyscale--Nope, no duplicates. And thanks for your kind comments.
sassy!
Very well written. As I was on your site I read a few of your poems. I found them to be clever and to the point. As paisley said cool cool cool
-bd
Littlewing--I think I've said this commenting on some other post, but I've always thought wisdom is applying knowledge, not just knowing.
Selma--thanks! I love it when I can be succinct (I love to talk, so that doesn't always happen...)
Myrtle, Leigh--good. Doing the audio files was sort of an experiment, but I think I'm going to stick with it.
Jadey, Guatami, Rebecca--thank you!
Rambler--is that "interesting" in a good way?
Ren.kat--why, thank you; I've not been called that in a while!
BD--what a lovely compliment, especially that you would go back and read some of my other things.
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