tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post4500494599101016239..comments2023-06-24T03:54:04.434-07:00Comments on chicklegirl: NaPoWriMo #1: tempus fugitchicklegirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-61457454312047183292012-05-15T00:34:48.066-07:002012-05-15T00:34:48.066-07:00Good verse!Good verse!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-61842314119771878452012-04-14T09:49:51.000-07:002012-04-14T09:49:51.000-07:00Okay, Ruth & Lizzie--I revised the ending (bas...Okay, Ruth & Lizzie--I revised the ending (based on inspiration that arrived in the shower, of all places). Is it more along the lines of what either/both of you were thinking?chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-88575348957288850742012-04-13T14:46:45.579-07:002012-04-13T14:46:45.579-07:00Ruth, I really like that idea. I'll work on it...Ruth, I really like that idea. I'll work on it. And if you have any suggestions on how to say it (or on any other parts of the poem) I'm all ears! :)chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-43846783928183250642012-04-13T14:41:08.452-07:002012-04-13T14:41:08.452-07:00I've been looking at this concept of keeping m...I've been looking at this concept of keeping my loved ones close while at the same time allowing them the space they need to learn and grow. I was wanting that juxtaposition to linger in the last line. Great first draft!helgaruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974009301824766322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-36338790871087582442012-04-13T14:17:54.873-07:002012-04-13T14:17:54.873-07:00Lizzie (or is that Steve?)--you are right. But how...Lizzie (or is that Steve?)--you are right. But how to say "for the rest of my life" without being cliche? I'm definitely open to ideas, since this is new and rough!chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183523477304220340.post-82186404660285653512012-04-13T14:04:01.475-07:002012-04-13T14:04:01.475-07:00Just til he is 20? Hmmm. Me thinks the rest of y...Just til he is 20? Hmmm. Me thinks the rest of your life...and so, to be a mother.MaurerLetters.comhttp://maurerletters.comnoreply@blogger.com